{"id":1044,"date":"2021-04-02T14:54:23","date_gmt":"2021-04-02T14:54:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.umflint.edu\/writingcenter\/?p=1044"},"modified":"2021-04-02T14:54:23","modified_gmt":"2021-04-02T14:54:23","slug":"dealing-with-logjams-for-when-the-words-are-stubborn","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.umflint.edu\/writingcenter\/2021\/04\/02\/dealing-with-logjams-for-when-the-words-are-stubborn\/","title":{"rendered":"Dealing with Logjams: For When the Words are Stubborn"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Not too long ago, my family visited Lumberman\u2019s Monument.&nbsp; It\u2019s on the Au Sable River west of Oscoda, and if you haven\u2019t been, I recommend it (although I think Iargo Springs, a few miles down the road, is even better).&nbsp; The views are excellent, the monument itself oddly compelling and vivid for being a bunch of lumberjacks cast in bronze, and the historical displays are informative.&nbsp; Next to the monument there\u2019s a small re-creation of a logjam, something the lumbermen in the monument were very familiar with.&nbsp; Essentially, it\u2019s just a pile of logs that have gotten out of order, tangled up with each other, and caused general upheaval, blocking the rest of the logs from going down the river to their final destinations.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sometimes a logjam could be cleared up with hooks and ropes.&nbsp; Sometimes it required dynamite.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Cool.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I hit logjams when I\u2019m writing.\u00a0 Sometimes I need a transition that I just can\u2019t figure out, or I can\u2019t quite make the devastatingly elegant thematic connection that I\u2019m shooting for. \u00a0Sometimes the idea I was trying to explain just keels over and dies, and I sit and stare at its corpse and think \u201cwell, this paper is in trouble.\u201d\u00a0 It\u2019s frustrating and demoralizing and time-consuming.\u00a0 It doesn\u2019t happen with every project, but when it does, I am well and truly stuck.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Bring on the dynamite.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>When the words are stubborn and the flow of writing is stopped, I\u2019ve discovered that, unlike the lumbermen floating logs down the river, I can just <em>go around<\/em> the logjam.&nbsp; What??&nbsp; It was revolutionary and liberating for me to realize that I didn\u2019t have to write the paper in order from start to finish\u2014if I had a decent idea of how I was going to organize it, or the topics I needed to cover, I could write the sections that were coming easiest at the time, and go back to the logjam later.&nbsp; It still needed to be attended to\u2014but <em>not right this second<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In practice, this means my rough drafts are often speckled with notes to myself in bold type to put a <strong>transition here<\/strong>, or <strong>expand on this idea and connect it to X<\/strong>.&nbsp; If I have doubts a particular sentence is doing what I want, I put that whole sentence in bold, too.&nbsp; Sometimes entire paragraphs end up in bold until I can take a step back and look at how they fit with the paper as a whole.&nbsp; Rather than get stuck and stare at the same word for 45 minutes, I make a note, and then I move on down the river.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I guess this isn\u2019t exactly the same as dynamiting a logjam, since I don\u2019t have one super-effective technique to fix a stuck spot.\u00a0 Going around the logjam and re-evaluating it later is more like teasing the jam apart with hooks, ropes, and patience, while still allowing words to flow around and beyond the jam.\u00a0 But the point is: if you\u2019re stuck, you don\u2019t <em>have<\/em> to fix it before you can continue writing.\u00a0 Eventually?\u00a0 Yes.\u00a0 In a first draft?\u00a0 Maybe not.\u00a0 <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Maybe this isn\u2019t news to you.\u00a0 <em>I\u2019ve had dynamite in my writing toolbox for years<\/em>, you say.\u00a0 That\u2019s awesome!\u00a0 Keep writing the good write!\u00a0 But if you, like me, have ever been stuck on a paper, and stuck in a mindset that says you can\u2019t move on until the problem is fixed, next time try making a note and sneaking around the logjam. \u00a0Why not?\u00a0 See what happens.\u00a0 Maybe you\u2019ll find a paper on the other side of your logjam, after all. \u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Image: http:\/\/www.tworvgypsies.us\/!USA-trip-6-2013\/2013-16J-Lumberjack.html<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Not too long ago, my family visited Lumberman\u2019s Monument.&nbsp; 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